11Secondclub October 2008
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11Secondclub animation October 2008
: #15 place.
Nice little touches. Really like the part at the end where he pushes him on. Think they part with the white guy saying "Can't go on forever" doesn't flow with the audio. Needs to be stronger.
I love the set up. The staging and composition is really nice too. The shoulder shrug at the beginning seems to pop a little though.
Nanda van Dijk:
I like your animation. maybe the gestures are a bit to big but the emotions are very nice. you should look at the timing of your lipsinc. Its a bit off at some points. nice work
Just some more improvements and it will be perfect. Like the nouse wip... I think it needs some changes, but the idea is good. Mayby it needs to be more subtle. I don't know. Just try some stuff.
Lip sync is just a couple of frames behind, but your animation is well executed. I would have liked to see some stronger poses, and more out of the green character, but the subtle effect works too.
The scoop at the end looks REEALLY nice.
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